Hi Dahren
Based on the fact you're a beginner, not bad at all. Other than a moment near the beginning your timing and rhythm seemed pretty consistent throughout the song.
Vocals...much like myself not your strong point but no doubt, much the same as guitar, things will improve as your confidence grows.
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